孙笑飞老师(@专硕英语孙笑飞)为MEM备考的同学们整理了英语二大作文高分模板句式，每一条都是重点，同学们务必多看几遍，牢牢记住。

大作文第一段：数据段
 

1.1开篇句：
 

(如图所示)the(图表类型…)shows/illustrates/demonstrates/presents/gives information about (描述对象…)in (地点…)between(时间…)and(时间…).
 

如图所示：It is clear that…/It is noticeable that…/We can see from the chart that…/As we can see from the chart, /As is shown in the chart,
 

图表类型：line chart / line graph, bar chart / column chart, pie chart, table
 

1.2.1描述动态变化的句型：
 

a. (描述对象…)increased/decreased considerably/slightly from (起点数字…)in(时间…)to (终点数字…)in(时间…).

b. There was a considerable/slight increase/decrease in (描述对象…)from(起点数字…)in(时间…)to (终点数字…)in(时间…).
 

c. (描述对象…)witnessed a considerable/slight increase/decrease from(起点数字…)in(时间…)to (终点数字…)in(时间…).
 

上升

Increase=rise (rose)=grow (grew)=climb=go up (went up)

an increase=a rise
 

下降

Decrease=drop(dropped)=decline=fall(fell)=go down(went down)

a decrease=a decline
 

波动

fluctuate between.. and..

a fluctuation
 

保持不变

keep almost unchanged at…
 

最大值

peak at…=reach the highest level at…
 

最小值

bottom out at…=hit the bottom at…
 

大幅度

Considerably=significantly=swiftly=dramatically

Considerable=significant=swift=dramatic
 

小幅度

Slightly=steadily=moderately=marginally

Slight=steady=moderate=marginal
 

1.2.2描述静态分布的句型：
 

a. We can see from the chart that(项目 1…)has the highest percentage, constituting ___%. This is followed by (项目 2…)which represents ___%.(项目 3…)and(项目 4…)occupy ___% and ___% respectively.

b. At ___% we can see that (项目 1…)takes the lion’s share. Next come(项目 2…)and(项目 3…) which take up ___% and ___% respectively.(项目 4…)falls far behind, account for ___%.
 

大作文第二段：原因段
 

2.1主题句必备句型
 

In my view, several possible reasons for the changes/result can be summarized as follows.
 

In my view, there are several contributing factors why the data are presented as above.
 

In my view, two possible reasons can account for the immense changes/survey result.
 

Some outstanding factors contribute to the development/result if we review the situation over the past years.
 

2.2.1万能理由一，关键词：进步
 

It is a well-established fact that (主语) have made extraordinary progress in pursuit of _______. As a result, an increasing number of them would _______. Undoubtedly, they will secure a bright future and better life.

主语：人们(people / individuals / Chinese people / people of today / young people / younger generations / the post-90s generation / freshmen / sophomores / juniors / seniors)

译文：(主语)已经在_______的追求上取得了巨大进步，这是公认的事实。如此一来，越来越多的人想要_______，无疑他们将会拥有一个光明的未来和美好生活。
 

真题对照
 

It is a well-established fact that have made extraordinary progress in pursuit of .
 

替换表达：pursuit of material life 物质生活的追求
 

适用年份：2010 手机用户数量，2011 国产车市场份额，2012 员工满意度调查，2014 城市农村人口变化，2015 居民春节花销，2018选择餐厅的因素
 

替换表达：pursuit of spiritual life 精神生活的追求
 

适用年份：2016 大学生旅游，2017 博物馆参观人数
 

替换表达：academic knowledge 知识;employment skills 就业技能;work experience 工作经验
 

适用年份：2013 大学生兼职情况，2019 大学生毕业去向，2020 大学生手机阅读目的
 

2.2.2万能理由二，关键词：渴望
 

It is not uncommon to find that (主语) aspire to _______. Therefore,_______ can gain great popularity among them. This development is believed to be in the interest of both individuals and society as a whole.

译文：不难发现，(主语)渴望_______，因此，_______便在他们之中受到了极大欢迎，我相信这个发展符合个人和全社会的利益。
 

真题对照
 

It is not uncommon to find that aspire to .
 

替换表达：have further improvements in their living qualities 在生活质量上有进一步的提升
 

适用年份：2010 手机用户数量，2011 国产车市场份额，2012 员工满意度调查，2014 城市农村人口变化，2015 居民春节花销，2018 选择餐厅的因素
 

替换表达：enhance their competitiveness 提高他们的竞争力
 

适用年份：2013 大学生兼职情况，2019 大学生毕业去向，2020 大学生手机阅读目的
 

替换表达：expand their outlook about the outside world 开拓视野
 

适用年份：2016 大学生旅游，2017 博物馆参观人数
 

替换表达：achieve lasting satisfaction from money spent 从消费中获得持久满足感
 

适用年份：2010 手机用户数量，2011 国产车市场份额，2015 居民春节花销，2016 大学生旅游，2018 选择餐厅的因素
 

替换表达：success 渴望成功
 

适用年份：2013 大学生兼职情况，2019 大学生毕业去向，2020 大学生手机阅读目的
 

2.2.3万能理由三，关键词：直面竞争
 

(主语)have no choice but to confront .
 

译文：(主语)别无选择，只能直面 。
 

真题对照
 

替换表达：intense competition in the employment market 就业市场的激烈竞争
 

适用年份：2013 大学生兼职，2019 大学生毕业去向
 

替换表达：enormous stresses felt from day-to-day life (academic study/employment) 来自日常生活(学习/工作)的巨大压力
 

适用年份：2012 员工满意度，2013 大学生兼职，2016 大学生旅游，2019 大学生毕业去向
 

2.3事实句备用句型
 

As a result， / As a consequence， / Therefore， / And so，

越来越多……

an increasing number of people would migrate from rural to urban areas.

受到欢迎……

moving to urban areas can gain great popularity among those who are living in rural regions.

当务之急……

migrating to urban areas has been placed at the top of rural residents’ agenda.

成为首选……

migrating to urban areas has become the first option for those who live in the countryside.
 

2.4十二大价值必备语料
 

2.4.1文化价值

learn about traditional culture 了解传统文化

preserve historical and cultural character 保护历史文化风貌

hand down from generation to generation 一代一代传递下去

respect local traditions and customs 尊重当地的风俗习惯

represent Chinese traditional values 体现中国传统价值观
 

2.4.2健康价值

be good for one’s physical health 利于某人的身体健康

improve one’s mental fitness 提高某人的身心健康

relieve enormous work stress 释放巨大的工作压力

feel refreshed and energetic 感觉焕然一新、充满活力

balance between work and life 劳逸结合
 

2.4.3经济价值

boost economic growth 促进经济增长

promote the development of 促进某个行业的发展

be economically independent 经济独立

be economically rewarding 有经济回报的

work/learn more efficiently 工作/学习更加高效
 

2.4.4环境价值

preserve ecological environment 保护生态环境

build green awareness 树立绿色意识

cultivate one’s love to the great outdoors 培养对大自然的热爱

Green hills and clean water are superior to gold and silver mines. 金山银山不如绿水青山
 

2.4.5技能价值

enhance one’s communication skills 提高某人的沟通能力

sharpen one’s problem-solving skills 提高独立解决问题的能力

improve one’s leadership and team spirit 提高领导力和团队精神

master basic employment skills 掌握基本就业技能

become more independent and self-reliant 变得独立且自助
 

2.4.6教育价值

get a clear perspective of sth. 对某事物有个更加清晰的认识

increase one’s knowledge about 增长某方面的知识

satisfy one’s curiosity 满足某人好奇心

put theory into practice 把理论与实践相结合

arouse one’s interest in exploring the unknown world 唤起某人探索未知世界的兴趣

build one’s character/values/positive attitude towards the world 塑造某人的性格/价值观/积极的世界观
 

2.4.7娱乐价值

be an ideal way to relax one’s mind 是放松心情的理想方式

make life/work not that boring anymore 让生活/工作不再那么无聊

enrich one’s day-to-day life 丰富某人的日常生活

appreciate picturesque landscape 欣赏美丽的自然风光

set people free from monotonous work 将人们从单调的工作中解放出来

be an enjoyable and memorable experience 是一次愉快的难忘经历
 

2.4.8情感价值

spend cozy weekend time with family members and best friends 和亲朋好友共度美好周末时光

strengthen the family tie / emotional bond 巩固家庭纽带/情感纽带

meet new friends with same hobbies and aspiration 结交志趣相投的朋友

don’t feel lonely and isolated anymore 不再感到孤独和寂寞
 

2.4.9就业价值

seek a decent and well-paid job 找一份体面且高薪的工作

enhance one’s employability 提高某人的可雇性

gain competitive advantages 获得竞争优势

gain rich work experience 获得丰富的工作经验

ease the employment stress 缓解就业压力

create more employment opportunities 创造更多就业机会
 

2.4.10生活价值

bring immense convenience in daily life 给生活带来极大的便利

live a cozy and carefree life 过上舒适且无忧无虑的生活

live a convenient and efficient life 过上便利且高效的生活

make the most of well-developed infrastructure 充分利用完善的基础设施

give sb. a fresh and pleasant feeling 令某人感到身心愉悦
 

2.4.11竞争价值

gain competitive advantages 获得竞争优势

increase overall competitiveness of sb./sth. 提高某人/某物的综合竞争力

enhance the core competitiveness 提高核心竞争力

face up to intense office competition 面对激烈的职场竞争

emerge victorious in competition with 在与某人的竞争中取胜
 

2.4.12技术价值

make enormous strides in the production of 某物的生产技术取得巨大进步

increase productivity 提高生产力

Science and technology serve as the greatest driving force behind a country 科学技术是一个国家的第一生产力
 

大作文第三段：评论段
 

3.1总而言之：
 

In conclusion/In summary/To sum up/All in all/Overall
 

3.2我个人认为：
 

I personally suggest/believe/think/suppose that…

it seems to me that…

I am convinced that…

my view is that…
 

3.3.1预测趋势，适用于动态图表
 

the tendency portrayed above is likely to continue for some time in the future, but at the same time, any possible downside of this development is worth noticing while we conclude its positive consequence.
 

译文：

以上所描绘的趋势，很有可能在将来会持续一段时间，但与此同时，在总结其积

极影响的同时，其任何可能的消极面都值得关注。
 

3.3.2点评结果，适用于动态和静态所有图表
 

(图表主题内容…) are well-organized and well-presented in the chart, whose figures will provide strong support for any further study and research.
 

译文：

(图表主题内容)在这张图中得以很好的组织并呈现，其数值将会为任何进一步的研究提供强有力的支持。
 

范文：

reasons for college students travelling are well-organized and well-presented in the chart, whose figures will provide strong support for any further study and research.
 

译文：

大学生旅游的原因在这张图中得以很好的组织并呈现，其数据将会为任何进一步的研究提供强有力的支持。

3.3.3分析利弊，适用于动态和静态所有图表(难度大，适合高分)
 

(主题词…) seems to be a double-edged sword. On the one hand, (写一句好处…), but on the other hand,(写一句坏处…).
 

译文：

某事物似乎是一把双刃剑。一方面，(写一句好处)，但是另一方面，我们可以预见的是(写一句坏处)。
 

写好处的常用表达：

a. X has beneficial effects on Y

b. X enables sb. to do Y

c. X benefits sb. to a large extent
 

写坏处的常用表达：

a. X may have negative effects on Y

b. X will put an extra stress/pose a challenge on Y

c. X may cause sb. to do Y
 

范文：

urbanization seems to be a double-edged sword. On the one hand, it enables more people to live a better life, but on the other hand, it is conceivable that its acceleration will put an extra stress on city resources.
 

译文：

城市化似乎是一把双刃剑。一方面，他能够让更多人过上更美好的生活，但是另一方面，我们可以预见的是，其加速发展将会给城市资源带来额外压力。

 

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